Hurray, one of those edgy 90s games where people have superpowers but aren’t superheroes! You know, like the other ones? This one at least has an interesting angle of entry by being more about society failing veterans, but is that enough to help it shine beyond it’s fairly timeworn genre? Well, let’s find out!
System Mastery 
The game setting is largely based on the Marshal Law comic, not Dark Knight Returns. If you don’t know where something came from do some basic research, you ranting nitwits.
Not impressed with your work here at all.